The Feat of Nobody Pencils 1, 3-8

These are 7 pages of my 10 page challenge, The Feat of Nobody. Essentially this is the end of the Odyssey but a western, with guns and horses and stuff. I've been working on these steadily but I wanted to post up these versions after having gotten excellent feedback from Skottie Young and C.B. Cebulski. I hope I've addressed the issues they brought up and fixed the inconsistencies in the art.

These are some of the most recent pages I've worked on, and among the best I've ever penciled. I simplified my system and now I've cut my page time down while getting the same level of rhythm and action as I get in my sketchbook people drawings. I'm proud with how these have turned out.

I have 3 more pages to pencil, I'll try to get them done for this weekend where I'll receive portfolio reviews from James Lucas Jones and Lauren Sankovitch. I'll do my best!